I do like that you are using Tom to bring us back into Luke, Tom and Logan's orbit. Using the invisible narrator to convey Tom's thoughts and to start filling the gaps on the family, feels right I think. Doesn't upset the apple cart of the direct first person dialogs from Logan and Misty as a continuous thread from the beginning. This was a nice, low key scene without too much drama to setup Chapter 8!
Why, thankyou Frank! I'm glad you liked it. My hope is that it gives the reader a sense of who Tom is, a bit of a softer side of him. All you've seen of him is hesitant, jealous and selfish and I've not really shown his character or his motivations. So hopefully this part of the story will help round him out a bit. 😅 As for the drama... you have so much to look forward to. 😉
Good stuff as always Jenny-I have been anxiously awaiting a little bit more! On Tom's backstory so thank you
My pleasure Dave, and thankyou. I've noticed that Tom was feeling a little flat, so I hope this glimpse is enough to round him out a little.
I do like that you are using Tom to bring us back into Luke, Tom and Logan's orbit. Using the invisible narrator to convey Tom's thoughts and to start filling the gaps on the family, feels right I think. Doesn't upset the apple cart of the direct first person dialogs from Logan and Misty as a continuous thread from the beginning. This was a nice, low key scene without too much drama to setup Chapter 8!
Why, thankyou Frank! I'm glad you liked it. My hope is that it gives the reader a sense of who Tom is, a bit of a softer side of him. All you've seen of him is hesitant, jealous and selfish and I've not really shown his character or his motivations. So hopefully this part of the story will help round him out a bit. 😅 As for the drama... you have so much to look forward to. 😉