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why do I feel so much dread about what's coming? Another great entry Jenny, and an even better cliffhanger haha

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Thanks Dave. I think the short answer is - because I engineered it that way. Carefully calculated and crafted. 😏😏 Hang on by your fingertips buddy. It's slow going these days...

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The tension, the build up is coming along nicely, I really like (and hate what is going on here. The baiting and trickery are despicable!)! And it's your story to tell, for us to enjoy and appreciate!!!

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Yes yes, friend Frank... I couldn't help but throw a little bullying in there. Felt right for where Misty is right now.

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On re-reading my comments, I think there is a possibility that they might be mis-construed. What I intended to convey was an appreciation of the story as developed! You are using the memes of harassment by evil members of a social group on campus trying reinforce their position as superior to those perceived as outsiders and different like Misty. Baiting and tricking Misty into a situation she would, on the surface think is friendly, but is actually intended to put Misty in a compromised position. This is despicable when it happens in real life! I'm over explaining I think, as I am prone to do... Keep up the great work!

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I wonder if you thought, I'd think you were saying, I was the despicable one... I wonder if I might take that as a compliment... 😈 You're exactly on track as far as it pertains to the story, and in real life, it happens more often than you'd think. Kids can be brutal.

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