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I’m really happy I came here to read from the start! This was an excellent beginning! I might be reading installments all day! Thank you! ✨💜✨

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Oh Charlotte you’ve made my day! I cant wait to read what you think!

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Super exciting start! I’m bookmarking this to read at bedtime :) It looks like one I may lose sleep over!

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Thanks Jodie! Great to see you here. Let me know what you think. 😉

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Exciting beginning. I'm hooked

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Oooh I'm so glad! Will you let me know if I ever get off track?😁

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I run full speed at any side path I can find, metaphorically speaking. I'll let you know if i notice, but my obliviousness in this regard is immense.

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Okay. Sounds good. I wonder if you'll notice the nuance... I look forward to your insights. 🤐

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Small formatting note on this, the "Next Scene" link above is a login link for your stack and not a working link to the next part.

Edit: After checking the next couple sections, it looks like all the links have this problem. An easy fix would be to open your posts in a new tab, copy the link you need from the search bar, then paste them over the broken links. It's a bit tedious, but a reliable way of avoiding links breaking.

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Okidoki! Links should all be working up to Ch2 Sc2. Sorry got called AFK. Here now in app. Huge pain to navigate when yr used to desktop view. Getting the hang of it. Let me know of u find more issues. 💜

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Nothing at all to apologize for with that. I'm still at work myself so I haven't been able to continue reading just yet. If I spot anything else like that I'll let you know!

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Appreciate it!

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Thanks so much for pointing this out. I know some of my links aren't working properly. I figured it out for the later posts but still getting arrive to the early ones. Sorry. Will get right on fixing it, hopefully before you get to pt3.

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Oh, nice! I see you make good use of the navigation. Excellent, excellent. Took me a while to get around reading. You're off to a fantastic start!

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Wow! Welcome Alexander! Its great to have you here. I'm still working out the navigation bugs. Hopefully all will be working properly soon.

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Dangerous indeed. Once you start it's nearly impossible to stop.

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It seems a dangerous thing, to begin to write!

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This was well written. You build up a lot of tension. Though I wonder if a person can survive in the snow for three days without proper clothing.

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Thanks so much Claudia! I know, it's maybe a little much, but Misty is not a 'normal' person, I'm sure you'll see if you catch the next episode. (Holding thumbs) Thankyou though! I loved your Seeds of Resistance.

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I noticed in part two 😅

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You read part two? 🤩

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Yes 🙌

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Dare I ask about part three? No! Never mind. Don't tell me. Ignorance is bliss after all. 😶

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I love how you have stopped procrastinating and have committed yourself! (I wish I could do the same) Looking forward to the next segment :)

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Nope, procrastination is an ingrained character flaw of mine, unfortunately. But I am hoping that this commitment will overpower it. I am still not sure how long I will be able to keep this up. 😶 So far so good though. 😁

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@David M. Poff thanks so much for the support ♥️😁

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Hi Robert! That's so kind. Thankyou.

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Hello and welcome to Substack.

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Wowie Jen!! Kan nie wag vir die volgende deel nie...

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