Without going back to look, I feel like you have maybe done some rework on the POV transitions that are a trademark in this narrative, eh?
And the lesson from James which gives some basic info on energy structures in these life forms, very helpful. Although who is James? Because he seems to occupy an influential role with this unusual child...eh?
Aw! Thanks so much Frank. I baked her a frog shaped cake. She smashed it so good. Was a blast, days away from taking her first steps, I go nowhere without some kind of camera on me.
As for the story, well I'm glad you found it fresh, and I am kinda clumping scenes together this time in a bit more logical way. I'm trying to cut back on the exhausting cliffhangers and give you a bit more coherence, but nope, not much of a reworking and absolutely no new additions. So...
As for James' position, well he is the monster under the bed. Always has been. Does it help that you get to meet him in Part II?
And yes you are a tease! You made that clear with the first draft and in the delightful exchanges that you tormented you readers with in the comments! So you better deliver said James, lol 😆
Well, hi there old friend. I've been well. Thanks for asking. Just busy. Life. 3 kiddoes. Not all that conducive to writing. But I'm determined to get back into it... And you?
Och, dude! Best of luck. Your writing is amazing! I wish I had time to give it the attention it deserves. But if I did that for everyone here I'd never get anything done. Like at all. There is so much talent here, and you are top notch among them. I really hope you manage your next masterpiece.
As for myself, I really just want to get back into the swing of things here. Hoping it will be enough to help me through this block I've been wrestling with. Good luck with the new project. I recommend your Starshatter to the ends of the Earth.
Happy Birthday to the wee tyke!
Without going back to look, I feel like you have maybe done some rework on the POV transitions that are a trademark in this narrative, eh?
And the lesson from James which gives some basic info on energy structures in these life forms, very helpful. Although who is James? Because he seems to occupy an influential role with this unusual child...eh?
Aw! Thanks so much Frank. I baked her a frog shaped cake. She smashed it so good. Was a blast, days away from taking her first steps, I go nowhere without some kind of camera on me.
As for the story, well I'm glad you found it fresh, and I am kinda clumping scenes together this time in a bit more logical way. I'm trying to cut back on the exhausting cliffhangers and give you a bit more coherence, but nope, not much of a reworking and absolutely no new additions. So...
As for James' position, well he is the monster under the bed. Always has been. Does it help that you get to meet him in Part II?
Yeah, call me a tease, I can't help myself. 😉
A frog cake to smash, I love it!
And yes you are a tease! You made that clear with the first draft and in the delightful exchanges that you tormented you readers with in the comments! So you better deliver said James, lol 😆
How have you been?
Well, hi there old friend. I've been well. Thanks for asking. Just busy. Life. 3 kiddoes. Not all that conducive to writing. But I'm determined to get back into it... And you?
Trying to complete another book this year, maybe two :)
Och, dude! Best of luck. Your writing is amazing! I wish I had time to give it the attention it deserves. But if I did that for everyone here I'd never get anything done. Like at all. There is so much talent here, and you are top notch among them. I really hope you manage your next masterpiece.
As for myself, I really just want to get back into the swing of things here. Hoping it will be enough to help me through this block I've been wrestling with. Good luck with the new project. I recommend your Starshatter to the ends of the Earth.
Say a word about your block on the chat if you like.
I'll see you there.