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Happy Birthday to the wee tyke!

Without going back to look, I feel like you have maybe done some rework on the POV transitions that are a trademark in this narrative, eh?

And the lesson from James which gives some basic info on energy structures in these life forms, very helpful. Although who is James? Because he seems to occupy an influential role with this unusual child...eh?

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