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Antila H. Belist's avatar

I like how you introduce each character. Not simple, elegant feels like a better fit.

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Jenny Homan's avatar

Wow, Antila, that's a lovely compliment! Extremely kind and I don't believe a word. But thanks so so much. 🧡🧡 I had absolutely no idea what I was doing here. I still need to go back and polish the first dozen or so posts, and there's some housekeeping that needs doing... One day. For now I'm stuck in, limited bandwidth.

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Antila H. Belist's avatar

I get it. We are our own worst critics. I guess I'm trying to say that I admire your ability to give enough information to get the point across, while keeping things moving forward. That is something I could improve on.

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Jenny Homan's avatar

Oh yes, worst worst critic I ever had was me. I kept this to myself for sooo long because I was afraid it wasn't good enough. Even though no one ever told me so.🤷🏻‍♀️

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Antila H. Belist's avatar

I'm glad you decided to share this with the world.

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Frank's avatar

I like the way the storyline intersects for 1,1 and 1,2 without seeing it coming until fairly late.

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Jenny Homan's avatar

aw, thanks Frank! You made my day today. Thanks so much for reading. It only gets better from here. 😉

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