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Von's avatar

I love first person, but hate present tense :)

The interesting thing for me is that they weren't really 'fight' scenes. They were training and relationship scenes.

I found the back and forth between POV a bit confusing. But great scenes.

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Frank's avatar

Magnifique Jenny! You handle fight scenes so well, gives me a shiver 🥶. I was really afraid that Logan might really get hurt by pushing Misty too far! Especially since she has chosen to trust him fully it seems. He is the Trainer now.

And I am glad you have stuck with your custom section graphics for Misty and Logan, they fit!

Also glad you have enjoyed and survived the Christmas celebration, putting the writing aside for a time with your Family!!

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