Reading so far, till scene 3, there is no informatiom about misty other than whats going on inside her head... you assume from her thoughts that shes a warrior, she has certain abilities and she has been trianed in fighting...but then the simple line of..."shes just a little girl" slams you in the face... and that brings a whole new dimension to your view of Misty...wow.
Oh the cliffhanger!
A planet, icy cold.
A spaceship, silvery gold.
One telepath, the father it seems.
One son, dressed in green
One son, dressed in red
A lost and cold escaped prisoner shoots with fire
Not to kill them, but for them to make her dead.
But the three search for the powered flame
ignoring the girl who's life is straits most dire
"Please shoot me," she silently begs
"I don't want to go back to that bed."
Thanks so much. I absolutely LOVE this!
I know! I am so glad you got that. :-D
Reading so far, till scene 3, there is no informatiom about misty other than whats going on inside her head... you assume from her thoughts that shes a warrior, she has certain abilities and she has been trianed in fighting...but then the simple line of..."shes just a little girl" slams you in the face... and that brings a whole new dimension to your view of Misty...wow.